Hi Dewi,

When you’re ready, if you pull your essay out of draft form, I’ll be able to give you feedback. It’s far more useful to you that I do this while you’re writing it than after you’ve finished, as you can act on what I say in the former situation. Just like how frustrating it would be if a coach told you how you could improve your game after the final match is over.

If you prefer privacy around your work, select the ‘private’ option when you publish it and only you and I will be able to read it – oh, and your last-year teacher.

CW